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Hells Sweet Serenity
Contributed by
jazzyjody
on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 04:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am the pick-pocket, for victims I search
I am the rapist, between shadows I lurch
I am the murderer no conscience, no soul
I am the informant, the grass-up, the mole
Im everything I have never wanted to be
Whats the point in living? What does life hold for me?
I am the wife beater, domestic abuse is my strength
I am the ultimatum lowlife and Ill stop at no length
I am gods creation gone arse over tit
I am not what he planned, plus a whole heap of *****
Im everything I have never wanted to be
Whats the point in living? What does life hold for me?
A bottle of tablets washed down with some ale
A sweet poison chalice, sure not to fail
A carefully placed cut which ruptures the vein
Each send me to hell and release all my pain
I am without pulse, no breath do I breathe
I am cold to the touch, but my death do not grieve
I am now everything I have wanted to be
I am dead to the world, in hells sweet serenity
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Re: Hells Sweet Serenity
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by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:40:37 PM AEST
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I can certainly say i hope
your not all these things, more
so i hope you aren't going to hurt
yourself. I got chills reading this poem.
I'd like to read more of your poetry!
This poem is definately heart gripping,
and so full of reality
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Hells Sweet Serenity
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:50:01 PM AEST
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| this is a really powerful poem - you really have a way with words. keep writing xxx |
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Re: Hells Sweet Serenity
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by spaceotter on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 11:08:53 AM AEST
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| Beautifully dark poem. Well written, I really enjoyed this. |
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Re: Hells Sweet Serenity
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by viola on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:43:43 PM AEST
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| deep down don't we all feel like this at some point. I'm sure you are not all these things. somebody with all that doesnt write as beautifuly as you. |
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Re: Hells Sweet Serenity
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by horseluver on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 12:55:37 AM AEST
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| fantastic write-like Oreo, I hope your not those things-and you just used them for effect in the poem. Well done - I hope to see more of your poems soon! XXOO ~Jess |
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