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OnE wISH...
Contributed by
Delusions
on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:31:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You belong to her,
stolen away
without a care in the world.
I mean nothing anymore,
barely a friend to you,
Until one night
fate left her behind
One bus trip
one wish granted
A mesh of emotions
running through eachothers veins
The whole time knowing
by morning
the fantasy will be over
And once again...
You belong to her.
Copyright ©
Delusions
... [
2004-09-28 05:31:15]
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Re: OnE wISH...
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:14:10 AM AEST
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a short great fantacy write
cheers!~ |
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Re: OnE wISH...
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by unforgiven on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 01:19:43 AM AEST
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so sad but a great poem huni! short but it has all the emotions still there in it. great work!
luv u
~xoxo~ |
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Re: OnE wISH...
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by Remy on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:38:32 PM AEST
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i wish i may, i wish i might... ah well, keep on wishing... lol, great writing!
-smelly_man! |
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Re: OnE wISH...
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:29:01 PM AEST
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=( that was sad..
made me feel insecure
x |
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Re: OnE wISH...
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by tWiStLe on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 02:24:48 AM AEST
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again... the same night my fault... people seem to think this is a fantasy... but it was actually real life.... and he was stolen from you by her... a 'friend' which makes it worse... he was rightfully yours (noyt to make it sound like u owned him) but u dont deserve it. Knowing the background information this poem suits the topic perfectly... its quick, sharp, gets to the point and is over before you know it, but in that short time you felt opposite emotions from one moment at the height then next moment at the low.... your like a yo-yo u get whipped up and then let back down slowly all twisted and spun around.
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