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Don't Stop Driving
Contributed by
free2you
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:19:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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H...how
O...ordinary
P...people
E...exist.
Hope is the roadordinary people take.
It leads them to a better place.
It keeps their foot on the accelerator.
Sometimes the road winds treacherously
through a forest of dead trees.
Sometimes there's a roadblock
that seems insurmountable.
Just then, there's a glimmer of light
illuminating the road ahead.
Its tiny glow
giving needed strength
to climb over the
roadblock.
If you don't see that tiny ray
maybe your gaze is averted
and you need to look around.
It's always there.
It never leaves.
We sometimes look in the
wrong direction.
Don't stop driving.
free2you2003
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Re: Don't Stop Driving
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:05:54 AM AEST
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| Cool poem, written with an inner dedication and a story with a message. awesome write. |
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Re: Don't Stop Driving
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:57:58 AM AEST
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Well thought out. Perhaps you could have said 'crash through' instead of 'climb over' when referring to the metaphoric road block, but whatever - I like it anyways.
Keep writing. |
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