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Little Sister
Contributed by
Adonia_Donata
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:33:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Do you see the void?
It's hidden nice and deep.
The hole goes on for miles,
The rim slippery and steep.
I've learned to hide the darkness,
To cover up the hole.
A smile here, a quick laugh there,
Hides the despair within my soul.
But she's not buying, the prying eyes.
She knows that smile well.
My girl, my sweet, she sees too deep,
My smile does not sell.
This gift, this love, what will I do?
Why have I been so blessed?
Make my heart forever true,
Oh One who loves me best.
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Adonia_Donata
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Re: Little Sister
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:00:19 AM AEST
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| Such a sweet dedication, made better with the flow and rythem of words no doubt from your heart, thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful poem, I so much enjoyed reading. |
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Re: Little Sister
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:25:17 AM AEST
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awwww, sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Little Sister
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by Tweeky on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 09:36:35 AM AEST
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A nicely written poem . very sweet .
Claire
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