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Speak (Dedicated to Cari)
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 02:24:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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your tounge is twisted
you dont show what you feel
i know the truth
your pain is so real
you hide your identity
as if at a masquerade ball
you think you can deal with it alone
that is what will cause you to fall
overcome your fear
voice your pain
its the only thing you can do
if you want to end this rein
i love you to much to let this continue
darling girl, you must speak
let it all out
to recieve the help you seek
create a revalation
welcome sweet relief to wash ou the past
create a new future
a life to last
please dear girl
quickly speak
dont let anything stop you
its time to reach happienesse's peak
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brokensoul
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2004-09-28 14:24:01]
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Re: Speak (Dedicated to Cari)
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by poetic_ire on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:56:52 PM AEST
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I didn't know Cari was going through all that. That's so sad. She's so quiet too.
She needs to voice and speak up everything. Twenty Bucks there are a lot of people who would listen.
Our family rocks like that. ^_^ |
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Re: Speak (Dedicated to Cari)
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:16:46 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Speak (Dedicated to Cari)
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by shattered_heart on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:39:45 PM AEST
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I can really relate, only the thing was that when I started to voice my pain to my family, I got kicked out. Hopefully that won't happen to her, but I think alot of people can relate to what's happening within their family life too.
Good write.
-Rachelle |
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