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Blanket of Love
Contributed by
KShink
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Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Your heart is racing,
Your breath comes short,
Your hand are shaking,
And the tears wont stop.
But when you step into the water,
It's like it was meant to be,
The joy that you feel,
You can't even explain.
And when you go under the water,
Is when you feel the lord the most,
It's like a blanket of love,
Just fell upon you suddenly.
And all the happiness that is in that room,
You share with your family and friends,
And all the joy that is in your heart,
Is like nothing you have ever experienced...
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KShink
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2002-11-11 21:00:00]
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Re: Blanket of Love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 01:54:32 PM AEST
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I like how yoyu made this feel like a blanket,I felt like God gave me a hug! Good write!
And Congratulations!Christina |
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Re: Blanket of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 01:12:08 AM AEST
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Dear KShink @-<-<<
what a beautiful feeling you were given, may it be with you for all your life long... and really nice poem:)
Your writing friend always Nessa |
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