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Lost Melody
Contributed by
Rihani
on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:45:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She
Stands calmly
Giving of
Her philosophy
Nothing too
Small
Set for
A fall
Heedless of
My call
She
Screams out
Explaining her
Lost melody
Nothing too
Droll
Set for
A fall
Heedless of
My call
Copyright ©
Rihani
... [
2004-09-28 19:45:24]
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Re: Lost Melody
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:48:21 PM AEST
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| Welcome to YPDC. This is a nice write considering it's your first write. Just write what's in your heart and the words will start flowing freely. Good job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Lost Melody
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:21:28 PM AEST
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| Short and to the point. good write. keep writing..............Mike |
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Re: Lost Melody
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 03:48:32 AM AEST
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This is good for a first poem.
Very lyrical...nicely done. |
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Re: Lost Melody
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by Rihani on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:48:35 PM AEST
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| Thank you for your kind comments, everyone ^_^ |
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Re: Lost Melody
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:58:40 PM AEST
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very good, keep 'em comin' hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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