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Morbid
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:07:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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standing in the rain
sheltered by sky's tears
as blood drips from my veins
thoughts creep apon my fears
so morbid, melancholy
as my eyes cry, shedding not a trace, so pure
of this battered mind, so pensive, no anger
when, from this depression, will there be a cure
who, to step into my life
and melt away all memory
there be no one for me, blood rusts apon my knife
but dying amongst the hell, of my sanitys dead army
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-09-28 21:07:14]
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Re: Morbid
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:12:41 PM AEST
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| genraly I stay away from suicide poetry, but you did use one of my favorite words as a title so i could not resist, and this my friend is very well done, I enjoyed it a lot. |
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Re: Morbid
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:05:18 PM AEST
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| great write. some excellent stanzas. |
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Re: Morbid
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by spyke_420 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:19:44 PM AEST
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I really felt your poem as I was reading it.... it is very deep and intense and I really relate to it....so hey I don't know how to vote but if I did i would give you a 5.... come cheek out some of my work if you like.... and yes I know I need to work on my spelling...
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Re: Morbid
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by tractorbabe on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:39:16 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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