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A Naughty School Girl
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:41:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A Naughty School Girl
I know A Naughty School Girl
or at least she thinks she is
She tingles with excitement
that fit right into his
The two of them so in love
with feelings so unreal
The perfectly beautiful lady
with tremendous sex appeal
The man a little older
but still gets the job done
The lady very satisfied
when all is said and done
They could make love day and night
and go on and on and on
The pleasure that they both get
being together from dusk till dawn
The feelings that they both have
unmatched in every way
How wonderful that is
to look forward to each day
As his and hers excitement grows
waiting for the next time
Their bodies so in rhythm
their words in perfect rhyme
Can you possibly imagine
how it is to be like this
Looking forward each moment
to each others kiss
Isn't love fantastic
to live and feel that way
Creating such excitement
with every word you say
This enchanting pretty woman
A Naughty School Girl in disguise
If her feelings could be measured
she would win the nobel prize
The gentleman himself
would get the prize as well
When it comes to loving one another
the two of them excel
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-29 08:41:49]
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Re: A Naughty School Girl
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:43:55 AM AEST
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Very interesting story. A love based on physical and sexual desire. I should hope there is more depth to the relationship than that. But, I did like these 2 lines...
Their bodies so in rhythm
their words in perfect rhyme
~Carrie~ |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:27:17 AM AEST
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Well dont know what to make of this one Bruce.
I will just say a great poem
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:30:54 AM AEST
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| What a lovely rhyme...enchanting really. lighthearted..just what I needed. Think I'll go ..smile now. thanks... |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:11:16 AM AEST
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hehehe a cheeky and lovely write Bruce,
pixie xx |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:22:23 AM AEST
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another great write Bruce naughty little school girl cute very cute
Michelle |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 12:51:29 PM AEST
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Hmm very interesting write bruce .
lmao you sounded like a dirty old man.hehehehe |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:28:46 PM AEST
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very lovely poem bruce. written so beautifully.great job and thanks for sharing
Brandy |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:55:27 PM AEST
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Hmmm I have to agree with katy...lol...
Enjoyed it tho....
Jenni |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl
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by Always on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:57:23 PM AEST
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| Great rhyme but the title does not seem to fit the story. *s* |
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