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Turning out a Glance
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 03:14:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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paint a picture
slowly fleeting
dont show me
hair wisps curl 'round
petals fall apon the ground
hand movements so quick, apon the blank canvas
vibrant colors swirl 'round
a dizzying, wonderful escape
turning away from nothing
looking out her glance
how can one know you
as above, beauty falls, cradling hope
wisper in my ear
the air hands with laughter
No.
as dawn breaks, over my bridge
of troubled Happiness
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-09-29 15:14:23]
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Re: Turning out a Glance
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 03:43:17 PM AEST
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| I think this is a great poem. I like free verse and prose. |
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Re: Turning out a Glance
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by free2you on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 05:39:22 PM AEST
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picture two hands trying to clap but missing...
picture a person filled with anger and ***** at the world she wants to blast at the world..
but she reads trying to catch up on reading so she reads this...doesn't know what to say..can't get past anger ..doesn't want to say anything rude..'cause it isn't your fault..but here she is parked in front of your poem..what now??????? Nice write!!!!!!! :-0 |
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Re: Turning out a Glance
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:23:53 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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