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My Someday
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
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Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 04:29:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Someday will come
Hold on just a little longer
Someday will be better
Just be a little stronger
Someday you won't need me
Until then strive for more
Someday you'll quit screaming
Just do what you've done before
Someday I'll be there for you
In your true moment of need
I'll be everything you want me to
Until then: crack and bleed
Someday you'll have meaning
Until then: be my book
Someday you'll be able
To forget the soul I took
Someday I will speak
I'll no longer be testing you
I'm learning who you are
Forcing out the best in you
Until then you are here
Until then you are mine
Under my control
I will make you shine
Copyright ©
_Raspberry_
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2004-09-29 16:29:04]
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Re: My Someday
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by Alovinmann on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 04:40:40 PM AEST
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| Intense Good Write THANKS |
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Re: My Someday
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 04:47:25 PM AEST
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control.. we all want it
we don't deserve it
yet we take it |
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Re: My Someday
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:33:27 PM AEST
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| no one wants to be controlled and yet some of us just give in and submit until we are ready to kill.... |
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Re: My Someday
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:08:39 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: My Someday
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by Hoots on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 08:22:18 PM AEST
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It sounds to me like somebody is on a power trip.........
Krystle |
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