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white world
Contributed by
brokenbylove130
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 05:06:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A girl, longing for something
longing for someone to call her own
to hold her
to love her
to keep her
but over and over again she is rejected
made to believe she has something
then its gone
torn out of her life
her heart
ripped out again
she cant take it anymore
the lying
the hurt
its too much
shes holding the knife
one small push
and she can be in blissful peace
she pushes and crimson blushes
her once white world
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Re: white world
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:29:04 PM AEST
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| This is good, though I am not sure I understand the last line. |
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Re: white world
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:29:04 PM AEST
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| This is good, though I am not sure I understand the last line. |
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Re: white world
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:00:41 PM AEST
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| fantastic. well physical doesnt solve emotional. |
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