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Fall
Contributed by
PinkYoshi
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:24:09 PM in AEST
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oops
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As fall comes upon us,
I feel much more like me.
This is the season for me,
I wish fall was the only season,
The scent in the Air, the color of the leaves,
The way the wind is blowing.
I can be myself, my true self.
Fall makes me want to kill,
Kill the minds of innocent little devils.
But fall also makes me venerable to love,
To love much more easily.
It also makes me see people,
For who they really are.
When fall comes I learn who my,
True friends are,
Usually that is very few.
When fall comes,
So do I,
My inner self.
Copyright ©
PinkYoshi
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2004-09-29 18:24:09]
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Re: Fall
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:30:29 PM AEST
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Tis' exactly how i feel about fall I love everything about it, Just the sent of the air makes my insides flutter. I also love haloween I don't know why , but its always been my favorite. (other then christmas) well it was wonderful anyhow.
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Re: Fall
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:45:30 PM AEST
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| great write. the last poem i read about fall they complained it was death to the seasons or something. so this was a nice change of pace. |
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Re: Fall
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by tractorbabe on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:50:28 PM AEST
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| great poem! fall a great season |
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Re: Fall
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 12:05:59 PM AEST
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beautiful. i love fall. that's when my b-day is :)
- bethani - |
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