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He Roams
Contributed by
x0it
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Out of the public cave
he roams in such a raw shape
Unprepared for the worst
they're in disgust by his taste
Despises his own vanity
thus does one last praise
Suddenly he falls
And a rotten figure lays.
Vapid cleanse quartz
spills upon his cheeks
Soon creatures came out in awe
then they licked away the salt
to survive in such a pale emblem
A decomposed forever dreams.
Sunset
eyes closed
Sunrise
closed eyes
Copyright ©
x0it
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2004-09-29 18:54:20]
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Re: He Roams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 07:27:36 PM AEST
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That is taking vanity waaaaaay too seriously. He definitely need counseling. Seems to me it would have been much easier just to get plastic surgery. Unless you are grotesquely deformed I can't understand being that concerned with outward appearances. Your heart and soul are inside the facade.
Sad,
Rita |
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Re: He Roams
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:40:12 PM AEST
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| i agree with reetz. but it was his life to do whatever he wanted to with. ::shrugs:: |
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