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The Passion Of Yellow And Red
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:07:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The leaves fall with passion.
Straight until one with the ground.
Crunching furious and with contempt.
Falling, though, without the slightest sound.
Before we could reach you.
And before we saw the leaves fall.
We wondered often of you.
And remembered life was life after all.
The red and yellow was upon us, then.
The sun pierced and was stuck in between.
That vibrant red and yellow,
Combined with a smile, the greatest of dreams.
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Re: The Passion Of Yellow And Red
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:10:44 PM AEST
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Re: The Passion Of Yellow And Red
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 01:31:08 AM AEST
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Excellent write.
Not a word could have been different- every line's perfect.
'We wondered often of you.
And remembered life was life after all.'
What amazing depth and feeling...
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