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If Wishes Were Kisses
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If wishes were kisses And kisses were songs I'd sing for you melodies Vibrant and long Trough crashing crescendos And moments of grace Composing such music Inspired by your face Magical, mystical Harmonies sweet Possessing, expressing Our souls' tender need Time would stand still For our chorus again Beautiful notes In a song without end
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Re: If Wishes Were Kisses
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 08:46:28 AM AEST (User
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Bravo!! Beautifully written
i enjoyed reading this one
Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: If Wishes Were Kisses
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 09:49:29 AM AEST (User
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Lovely write Candice,
I think I still remember how this feels, and if I didn't you've just helped me to. Thankyou!
With love
Dean:-)
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Re: If Wishes Were Kisses
(User Rating: 1 ) by Yellowrose on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 11:54:42 AM AEST (User
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THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BRILLIANT. THANKS FOR SHARING IT. ALL THE BEST, YELLOWROSE. |
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Re: If Wishes Were Kisses
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 01:13:34 PM AEST (User
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Lovely write, Cloud...
Jenni |
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Re: If Wishes Were Kisses
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 08:28:25 AM AEST (User
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Outstanding write Cloud, short sweet and to your point, great write.
The Phantom |
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Re: If Wishes Were Kisses
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetolbaby on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 02:09:09 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful! Just simply beautiful . . . . |
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Re: If Wishes Were Kisses
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kirby on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 08:31:10 PM AEST (User
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great ryhming poem, it takes great skill to make a grea tpoem that rhymes. Love:::Kirby |
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