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A Naughty School Girl 2
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:39:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our Naughty School Girl
is up to it once more
She is planning in her mind
once he opens up the door
What will she do
when he reaches out for her
She knows in her mind
every emotion in her will stir
Their long awaited meeting
will soon again take place
She will enter his apartment
with all her style and grace
Fall into his arms
as their passion begins to rise
What happens next
is surely no surprise
A few words here and there
spoken softly to each other
As they make passionate love
beautifully to one another
Their days together limited
so they take advantage of this
Falling more in love each minute
with every fiery kiss
They knew that this would happen
of this they both were sure
Not seeing one another very often
very difficult to endure
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-30 02:39:39]
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Re: A Naughty School Girl 2
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:53:48 AM AEST
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Very sweet, pasonate write.
good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl 2
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 05:08:50 AM AEST
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smiles the naughty school girl I love it love the second part as well Bruce
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Re: A Naughty School Girl 2
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:35:00 AM AEST
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| Sounds like this is built on just physical attraction. Too bad...it won't last when that fire dies down...Hope there's more. Or is it just imagination? A writers dream so to speak... nice if so.. |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl 2
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by Remy on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:45:01 AM AEST
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sounds like my ex, grr... lol, but good writing - i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl 2
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:57:53 PM AEST
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Getting more interesting..... *smiles*
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