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Abandoned
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 04:12:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i took a risk on you
i risked people's feelings
i risked myself
i enterd your head game
and i even enterd reality
you left me vulnarable
easy to hurt
and weak
but it felt worth it
by the charming words you speak
but i was wrong
and now i feel like a nothing
i shouldn't have followed the fair tale
i feel so abandoned
you took
then left
you hurt me
you made me hurt somone else
i hate your lines
i hate your lies
sew up your mouth
because you couldn't tell me the truth
you turned your back
without a doubt
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-09-30 04:12:25]
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Re: Abandoned
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by Remy on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:14:06 AM AEST
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feels like the sinister version of " i wish i may, i wish i might!" interesting writing... ;0)
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