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If I Were A Flower....
Contributed by
YPDC_Group_Writes
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Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 05:36:39 AM in AEST
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Contributors: Phopenix, neptunes_first, BaronHawk, Silent-No-More, TimeBot, Lovewriter, Former_Member, MomentInTime.
If I were a flower
I would be a rose
passion follow me
where I roam
trailing petals of love
thorns of revery.
If I were a flower
I would be a violet
Faithful always
Growing in the gardens of our future
Petals of honesty
is what drives me
If I were a flower
I would be a camellia
Soft and velvety
Enticing to the eye
Softly fragrant
Extremely delicate
Yet needing touch
Were I to be a flower,
I'd be the thistle's efflorescence,
Jagged, yet lustrous-hued
In the season of my bloom.
If I were a flower
an orchid I would be
a definate warrior
it can grow where it be
surviving on mountains
rocky craters, sandy ground
its roots cling for certain
never ever giving ground.
If I were a flower
I would be the white bloom
Of the rambling jasmine
The poets jasmine
Quietly eloquent, full
Reaching past summers end
Into autumns cool
If I were a flower
I would be a peony (pee-oh-nee)
Large and fluffy petals wear
And the pink you'd see in me.
If I was a flower,
I would be a daisy,
No I am not crazy,
but petals I have many,
Each represents my love so true,
Each one you pull
It would say GOD loves you.
If I were a flower
my choice would be based
on the essence that's me,
and knowing myself
as well as I do, I'm sure
a forgetmenot I'd be.
I am a flower
Blooming each morning
Opening myself
For all to see
All the wonderful petals
of me.
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Re: If I Were A Flower....
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 06:06:19 AM AEST
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| This beautifully written and compsoed by all of you, awesome choice of flowers, to, obviously to each personality. cool poem. |
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Re: If I Were A Flower....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 07:13:55 AM AEST
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I'd forgot I'd took part in this. Imagine my surprise when I was listen in the authors . . .
I must say its one of my better (of somewhat shorter) group write contributions, and whomever penned the end summed up the poem wonderfully. I'm also left wondering who's the 'forgetmenot' . . . but I think I have a clue. lol
Impressive. |
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Re: If I Were A Flower....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:26:57 AM AEST
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Fun to read this - and I imagine that Neptune is the thistle, and SNM the forgetmenot. Interesting to see the different styles come together like this. The sum of it makes for a great read.
Thanks all. |
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Re: If I Were A Flower....
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:46:58 AM AEST
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| AWsome job everyone. |
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Re: If I Were A Flower....
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:13:36 PM AEST
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very lovely all did a nice job a pure joy to read a nice arrary of friends in the gardens of life
Michelle |
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Re: If I Were A Flower....
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:48:44 PM AEST
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How on earth did I miss this post?
The forget-me-not? No, no... is wasn't me. Oh, I could search for the forum thread - but if I had to guess, I'd suppose it was Timebot. ??? maybe, maybe not???
I am jasmine. Oh! how I wish I could smell it's sweet scent now!
SNM
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Re: If I Were A Flower....
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by purplestary on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 08:36:39 AM AEST
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| cool poem. this came out realy nice. |
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Re: If I Were A Flower....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st July 2013 @ 02:18:19 AM AEST
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| This is awesome! |
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