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Dripping Red
Contributed by
reilt
on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 12:22:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Peel back my skin
to the underneath of my bone
Watch the whites of my eyes
become pink
Mirrors are everywhere
when I need none
Oh how today is
a powerful struggle
Half-hearted efforts to get from this minute
to the next
That blood melts the monotony
into my second breath
My flesh eaten away
scratched within an inch
of life
And soaks itself
with its own
Dripping red.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-09-30 12:22:31]
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Re: Dripping Red
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 12:26:43 PM AEST
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poetic horrorscope... interesting. glad i haven't eaten breakfast yet! lol, no really it's a good writing, i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Dripping Red
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 01:34:27 AM AEST
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| awesome!!!! |
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Re: Dripping Red
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:24:04 AM AEST
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| This is more than just awesome. It's FANTASTIC!! FANTABULOUS write I must say!! |
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Re: Dripping Red
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by Ina on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:07:33 AM AEST
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| As much as I like YOU, i didnt like this poem...nice beginning, but then it got too metal cliche... |
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