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FROM ABOVE THEY COME
Contributed by
wellsmark
on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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From Above The Come
Banished from the heavens,
The Gods now roam the battered land.
Mathis God of air,
Delude God of fire,
Modan God of water,
Travel the vast time span.
In search of the four tablets,
To regain prestige, honour with longing power.
To make all minions and deities,
Bow down and cower.
Mathis glides across dark heavens,
Mortals look on gasping with fear and ore.
Modan skims across foamy waves,
Landing firmly on golden shores.
Delude engulfs a warrior with a jet of fire,
Who dared to deify his law.
Mortals scream in fiery agony,
Writhing helplessly on the floor.
A tablet is retrieved at the bottom of a lava ravine,
Shinning with a ghostly white glow.
Another stumbled across,
In the bleak coldness of the arctic snow.
Two Gods return to the heavens,
With tablets, power regained.
But for Modan and Mathis,
They must search hard and remain.
Constant is the threat from deities, minions,
Even powerful clerical scrolls.
The two remaining Gods transform,
Into wandering souls.
Disguised and diseased,
To fool the unexpecting city.
Until the power tablets regained,
Or Zeus takes heart or pity.
Copyright ©
wellsmark
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2002-11-12 10:30:00]
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Re: FROM ABOVE THEY COME
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by aernby on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 10:38:36 AM AEST
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a good story but is poetry the right medium for it ?
it reads well, overall a good write . . . |
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Re: FROM ABOVE THEY COME
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 02:11:36 PM AEST
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This was a wonderful write
I think you could write a good book
the way you tell stories like you did
in this one, it was beautiful
You have alot of talent, Thanks
for sharing this, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: FROM ABOVE THEY COME
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by wellsmark on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 06:57:31 PM AEST
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| Thankyou for your comments I do have one book published called Dreams That Run Wild |
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