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deep in ground
Contributed by
babe-grl
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Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:02:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Deep in ground
There she was burieddeep down in the ground
Where none can find her
She was buried while she was still alive
But she couldnt moveshe felt like she was paralyzed
She could hear what was happening around her
But couldnt speakshe couldnt move a thing in her body
Not a leg not an armno nothing
She was trying so hard to screambut even a beep didnt come out from her
Thenshe was finally able to open her eyeswitch was already covered with dust
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Re: deep in ground
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by poetmarie on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:59:01 PM AEST
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| Hmmmm. Very interesting, it's - paralyzing. Good write. |
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Re: deep in ground
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by inoc on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 04:07:25 PM AEST
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a bit scarey....
deep underground...
cheers!~ |
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