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Memory Of You
Contributed by
unforgiven
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Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 07:41:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You were meant to be here,
Stay to watch me grow,
Not leave so suddenly,
Never saying goodbye.
I know the illness possessed you,
You fought for so long and yet,
Is it selfish for me to wish,
You could have stayed for longer?
I feel like I've done so much wrong,
Never making you proud,
Disappointed you with my actions,
You can't tell me otherwise.
You left us all behind,
I used to be so angry,
Took it out on myself, all that pain,
Missing you was the only thing I knew.
I cry over the thought of you,
All of us still in mourning,
The things we never did and said,
Constantly playing in my mind.
I've decided now is the time,
I have to say goodbye,
While I'll never forget,
I need you to leave me.
Thinking of you is tearing me apart,
I won't let myself be happy,
While the thought of you remains.
All I ask of you is to be proud,
Of who I am and who I become.
To look out for me from up there,
And I'll miss you dad,
More and more each day.
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unforgiven
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Re: Memory Of You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 08:14:28 PM AEST
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If you don't feel you made him proud then, then start achieving that goal now. Trust me, he is watching down on his family. It is never too late to make him proud. It is always hard to lose someone, but losing a parent is difficult. I had a difficult time when I lost my Dad. Just know he is with you and one day you will see him again.
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Re: Memory Of You
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by Delusions on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:15:49 AM AEST
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| oooh BeccaJ... this poem is utterly amazing. It made me cry... the words just pouring out from ur heart. U have made him proud gurly... I know for a fact that you are an amazing person, and you should know that too, just as ur dad does!!! U know I am always here for you too... im just a call away!!! Love you Hunni bunchs ~Delusions~ |
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Re: Memory Of You
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:09:24 AM AEST
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So upsetting..
I wish I had the power to help you |
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