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show me the way
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:07:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im stuck in the middle
Im caught in between
Im lost and confused
And everyones so mean
Explain how this happened
Explain how I feel
What do you do
When noting seems real
Theres so many choices
Theres no time to wait
Why cant everything be as simple
As baking a cake
I dont know what to do
I dont know what do say
Why aint there someone there
To show me the way
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Re: show me the way
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by Kimie56 on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:12:45 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem, great write. I feel the same way sometimes. |
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Re: show me the way
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:43:35 PM AEST
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| Everything will be ok. Keep your head held high. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: show me the way
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by n2dep2care on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:48:05 PM AEST
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Boy, can I relate to this! Same questions I am asking. Very nicely done!
Laurie |
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Re: show me the way
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by Jenn2004 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 02:40:44 AM AEST
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| Good poem, i feel the same way u do. I often wonder if there is someone out there that would show me the way, but the only person that can show me the way is myself!!! |
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