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Not yet ready.
Contributed by
SilentSuffering
on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:06:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I inhabit the deadlfulness of my skeleton,
The beauty of my life gone with the tide.
I no longer feel the desires of youth,
Only the passage of unhappy time.
I lie awake and wonder when He comes,
Will I be ready to say I am finished?
I think, 'no', for I am not yet done.
There are blue eyes and innocent smiles,
I have yet to ingest into myself.
I am not yet ready, nor are they.
So I wait...
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Re: Not yet ready.
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:09:47 PM AEST
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| As a Christian, I can understand the problem. Nice write tho; kudos to ur mom. I'll say an extra prayer for the situation. |
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Re: Not yet ready.
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:19:27 PM AEST
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| and who has the right to judge the wrong or right paths? |
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Re: Not yet ready.
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by SlimStaple on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:46:03 PM AEST
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| Pardon me, but it's not a thing you can just deciede to be. It's not the "wrong path". Who is to say what the wrong path is? If that's what she is, then just let her be happy. You don't just wake up one day and go, "Oh I think I'll be gay today." That's not how it works. |
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