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Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
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Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:13:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I wanted to thank you for
the memories; dead and
canned and
flat, stored in word documents
and message histories
and dotsofpixelatedbinaryconceptualwhatevers
that I don't understand
(I don't understand anything anymore)
which are everything we ever
shared; everything we ever
had
and it was so much--
we never had today, and
we somehow missed out on yesterday, but
we found tomorrow
and tomorrow was words
'cause words were our breath, our
laugh, our
life and love and eyes and soul
and after trying
and tryingandtryingandtrying
to bend and shape my words (which
are fractured, now)
into a thank you, I still
can't.
(you're leaving and the words
are going with you and
IneedthewordsandIneedyou)
but you were always the one
who showed me how to stay strong
and I can lose the words, and smile
for you
and I can lose you, and
try to smile
(I can, I can, I will)
but I cannot shape the broken words
into a thank you, thank you, thank you god,
for the memories
and the tomorrows I will always have
because of you.
*
Much love, Becky.
your friend always,
Nora
Copyright ©
ShadowDaughter
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2004-09-30 23:13:33]
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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
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by arden on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:20:38 PM AEST
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well i thought i was done crying but after reading this im crying even harder now lol
nora.... i dont have words for this... you have no idea what it means to me.
ill always be here for you girl. always.
stay strong.
i love you deeply girl.
your friend always,
Becky |
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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:34:42 PM AEST
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I love your poem and I love how you can express yourself in words I never could ever put together and how you put it together is beyond me. sandy
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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:43:13 AM AEST
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Awww, hunni, this is so sweet, and so sad.
I'll miss Becky too.
*hugs you and Becky loads*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
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by pixie on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 11:03:03 AM AEST
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awwww this is beautiful and very moving *hugs to both of you*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 07:02:24 PM AEST
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| Becky's leaving us? That's not right. Nora, this is such a sweet poem to a dear friend. None of us will ever forget her. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:30:02 AM AEST
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Well done, and I think both of you are great people, just for the record ;o)
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
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by venkat on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:40:43 AM AEST
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| well written..I feel you and your friend..both are very nice people. venkat |
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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:49:57 AM AEST
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nora this is so sweet and beautiful, written from one very special lady to another, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:55:20 AM AEST
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| just, beautiful. truly. |
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