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I Know You
Contributed by
calista
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Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 12:07:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I Know You September 30, 2004
You've fallen To where, I don't know Will never know, it's too deep For my simple mind to grasp Too far, for my warmed heart to keep. I know you, better than you think So dearly, in all the mess I know that you would leap. And so, why have you fallen? When all I can think of you Is spirited and strong, keeping on But in the light you've shed All I see is what I dread. What has happened? To you, I used to know? What has wronged you, Enough to let you go? My friend, I knew a silhouette Of who you have become The shadow, glimpse, you've let Take you away, and take from. I know you, would try harder Work longer, if you saw What has happened To the you I used to know? I know you, have seen the bitter ends So why is it then that when I see you now, you are defeated Depleted And worn? I know you, would remember How things used to be I know you, would ask me If it wasn't the way it is now So, what has happened To make this different To cease your bringing your life to me? I know you, could love yourself again, I know you Would, If you saw yourself, the way I do. I know you.
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Re: I Know You
(User Rating: 1 ) by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 12:55:55 AM AEST (User
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Wow that is very good poetry .
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Re: I Know You
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 01:18:59 AM AEST (User
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Calista...
U do...? U know me huh? Perhaps better than I know myself... sometimes? LOL!!! Just kidding...
Great write... It was defintely a different type of poem... loved it! Keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: I Know You
(User Rating: 1 ) by brokenwings on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 03:08:37 AM AEST (User
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that was great... keep it up... nice write...
tasha |
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