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She Comes For You
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 10:53:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She creeps down the hall
late at night,
hides in the shadows
out of sight.
Her fangs drip
with blood still,
didn't get satisfied
from her last kill.
She looks in every room
for fresh meat,
deep in her chest
her heart doth beat.
Between her fingers
she feels every crevasse of the wall,
as she silently lurks
down the dark hall.
In her hand
she holds a still beating heart,
from her last victim
with it she did part.
She comes for you
in the dead of night,
you had better hide
stay out of sight.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Sept.22/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-10-01 10:53:39]
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Re: She Comes For You
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by pixie on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 12:47:02 PM AEST
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Ohh very creepy, glad I read this early on, otherwise Id be quite paranoid by now hehe, great write Cynthia,
pixie xx |
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Re: She Comes For You
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 03:38:21 PM AEST
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very spooky gave me a chill or two still daylight here thankgoodness oh geez thanks I have to leave for work at 1:30 am tonight now Im Skerrrrrrrddddddddddd
a very haunting dark poem!
Michelle |
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Re: She Comes For You
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:53:29 PM AEST
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Awwww..I'm shaking!!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: She Comes For You
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:02:24 PM AEST
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| excellent write. =] |
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Re: She Comes For You
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:33:33 PM AEST
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Man this is a gothic master peice along with flow
and rhythum, verry vivd, in a phrase, one awesome
experience . . . Dorian : ) |
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