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The one who makes you whole
Contributed by
silentshadow
on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:13:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A dream i had of visions of love
Made me know , I want the one
He came and said, You have the promise
Of one gift that would be the , honest
Big round eyes and skin so soft
Made me know , I was in the loft
He winked and smiled, and said no word
But, gave me a nod and it meant the world
To know the sweetness of this one man could be
I knew it was , more and would ever be
He said not alot, but did with the soul
And made me know I was the only, for a whole
We said we wanted many treaures, and it be
Seven beautiful, would be the glee
To have the wonderful , that one should wish
Could only be , the simple dish.
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2004-10-01 16:13:52]
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Re: The one who makes you whole
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by theMoth on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:54:03 PM AEST
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you expressed yourself very clearly here.
Lots of feeling.
--Mothy |
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Re: The one who makes you whole
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by Archie on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 08:45:53 AM AEST
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| This is a good poem. I like the happy ending |
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