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Fallen
Contributed by
brokenbylove130
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Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 05:33:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Feeling like im falling down
deep into my abyss
a place of biting theving liars
trying to steal my soul
taking all the joy,
replacing it with sorrow.
Tears of blood sweat drip down my face.
i try to climb back out agian
my fingernails gripping nothing
i cry out in horror
Why?
Why?
but agian my voice is stifled.
i dont want to give in to this
this horrid world im forced to be in
but they're pulling me in agian
im falling again.
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2004-10-01 17:33:54]
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Re: Fallen
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by theMoth on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 06:02:22 PM AEST
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Pretty effective.
Would be hard not to
believe your feelings expreesed
in this one.
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Re: Fallen
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 07:05:10 PM AEST
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I don't know much, but I know that this was
quite good. I can relate to this quite a bit...
wanting out, but being unable to get out. Very
good poem... keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Fallen
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:31:22 PM AEST
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| good write. much potential lies in this. |
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