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untitled
Contributed by
bebe20071
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Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 07:24:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Before you ignored me
You thought I was a girl that will never be
I dont care and kept trying
I couldnt help the feeling
You look at me and give it a try
You quieted to soon cuz you were too shy
But you told me that you interesting in a way
Without your said
Things went great
And I had an up coming date
then things when wrong
and we didnt get along
hearts were being broken
and words were never spoken
then you came to me
and said words sweet as they ever can be
and you told me to smile
and never to cry at lest for a while
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2004-10-01 19:24:08]
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Re: untitled
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:26:06 PM AEST
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| excellent write, especially the last stanza. make a title for this, and it will be fantastic =] |
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