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Accept no Sunshine
Contributed by
MaMort
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 08:42:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As you watch the very remnants of shattered light fade into the sky
Darkness imbeds itself into your eyes
For one split second your body feels cold
You can't see your hand or the light it still holds
a million creatures with curious glares
watch as you blankly stare............
into nothing, or so it seems
Yielding so gracefully into your pensive dreams
As the buildings behind you seem to sway with the sounds
You don't understand what it is you have found...
You can't comprehend quite where you are
But the light in your hand, won't go so far.
So release the sun and succumb to the night
For the day will be back, hear what I say
So darkness come hither, and show me your might
Embrace me for now, and wait for the day.
Copyright ©
MaMort
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2004-10-02 08:42:54]
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Re: Accept no Sunshine
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by DamentedSuicide on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:34:05 AM AEST
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Very good wright!!
~~~Raven~~~ |
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Re: Accept no Sunshine
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:37:29 AM AEST
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that was excellent. i was spellbound to the end. keep writing
av |
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Re: Accept no Sunshine
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:36:01 PM AEST
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Captivating write...... I enjoyed it a lot..
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Re: Accept no Sunshine
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:00:55 AM AEST
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| good write. =] |
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Re: Accept no Sunshine
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by Hoots on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:52:32 AM AEST
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That was really good.
Krystle |
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Re: Accept no Sunshine
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:06:14 AM AEST
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truely beautiful, i was delightfully enchanted:) hugs n' love nessa
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