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VANITY
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 01:20:09 PM in AEST
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with beauty that lasts,
legs that go on forever,
long flawless locks of bronze waved hair
catch the wind and breeze without care,
old soul has been everywhere,
i dare,
with eyes of green absorbing all the beauty i've seen,
to bask in my own glow,
all this radiance i show,
my body has flow,
my soul does know how much it shows,
through my skin,
exposed within
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2004-10-02 13:20:09]
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Re: VANITY
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 01:26:43 PM AEST
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| It's a tough call, especially for ugly ducklings to see anything but the false reflections. Kudos on knowing who you are and basking in it. It *is* an art we are too often not taught, to love oneself. |
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Re: VANITY
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 03:40:28 PM AEST
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I agree we aren't tought to love ourselves...especially with everyone else in this world judging to extremes...great poem bro...
please comment on my work too
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Re: VANITY
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 04:50:04 PM AEST
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| This was great..so opposite my reflection..legs that go on only far enough to reach the ground and get me where I need to go...etc. Let me borrow your mirror. |
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Re: VANITY
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by Hoots on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:49:33 AM AEST
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Well....I can see exactly why the poem is titled "Vanity"....haha....anyways....It was a very good descriptive write. The figurative language was outstanding...
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Re: VANITY
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:45:31 AM AEST
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From this write I'd say you have no problem at all with your self image. You are a lovely young lady. My thought is sometimes women like to expose themselves because they want the attention. They have lacked attention in their life, and this is one way to get it. They want someone to look at them, they need some sort of recognition. I find it sad. Why can't we as women realize it's our minds we should be exposing not our bodies(I know you have no problem with showing your body). Just remember Brit you are beautiful and as long as you know that it shouldn't matter what others think, and negative attention is not a good thing sis(You're always telling me about guys saying stuff to you).Believe in the strong beautiful woman you are. Peace Laura
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Re: VANITY
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:20:20 AM AEST
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Well kinda reading your posts back to front.
But in contrast to the other poem, vanity 2 here you see and feel such beauty, and revel in it with each word written and so very vividly composed.
But I still feeling that with your last poem you were selling yourself short.
Well you take care ok
Karl |
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