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No End
Contributed by
Vicxy
on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:51:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A little girl who couldn't grow up
The midnight whisper that was never heard
an uncried tear that still in her eye
the lonely year when she wanted to die
an unheard plea she screamed in the night
the sleeping cat that saved her life
a perfect woman she couldnt be
the broken smile that no one did see
a treacherous friend that brightend her day
the lonely ride that clouded her way
an endless pit that she fell in
the difficult fight she couldnt win
and fianl chance she didnt want
The long awaited end that will soon not come
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Vicxy
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2004-10-02 21:51:27]
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Re: No End
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:02:37 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. very random though. well i cant really say if youve gotten better or worse, because basing talent off of just two poems isnt exactly a smart thing to do. =] |
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Re: No End
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by Hoots on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:43:54 AM AEST
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That was awesome.....I really liked it a lot. You should definetly keep writing and hopefully I will read more of your poetry sometime.
Krystle |
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Re: No End
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 04:06:45 AM AEST
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| omg this is awesome! I love it |
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