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I don't need you and I never will
Contributed by
the_fallen
on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When I was child
I thought I was the happiest in the world
But I was wrong
I thought I had the greatest family
But I was wrong about that too
I thought I had the greatest friends
But I was wrong about that even more
I love my friends, but the dont love me
As I cry, the darkness comes
And says, Dont worry Ill be your most best in the world
I was such a fool believing that
Chains bounds me to the ground sucking every ounce of my happiness and hope
I hear footsteps in the distance
As it comes closer
I see you laughing
I try to say something, but the chains choke me
Let out a cry and you hear me
I reach out my hand and ask for help
You start laughing at me and walk away
I try to chase after you
But the chains of darkness hold me down
I cry in the dark as you walk away
You dont know me or the pain I'm in
As I wait for you
My heart grows needles full of confusion, pain, and sorrow
As that happens my soul fades away
Waiting for you in the dark
Now I am only an empty shell lost in eternality
Falling and falling wait for you to grab my hand
But you dont
The chains grow strong
As I grow weak of hope
I have lost everything and everyone
My hope, my dreams, my......everything is gone in the darkness
I scream out your name
But you dont hear me
Now I act, not showing my real colors
You never really knew when I was lying or not
Youre not my real friends
You dont love me, you dont even know me
So why I am I still your friend?
I ask that question over and over again
But I never found the answer
I cant hide myself anymore
I have to let it go, I have to let myself free
It hurts so much that I cry each night
My life is a living hell
I want to bleed to death
No one understands me
Why dont kill myself now?
I want to, but I cant
The darkness wont let me
Why cant I die?
If you really love me, then kill me
Rip out my heart and bury me in the forest
I cant live anymore
All the pain is destroying me slowly
Please I want to die, please kill me
I have no need to live anymore
I have lost everything, so why should I live?
I wonder and wonder
I pled you, please kill me
I dont care if youre against it
Ive been waiting for it for a long time in my life
If you want me to be happy.then do itkill me
You left me alone, so why should I live?
Tell me, not because you want me to live
When you finish reading this poem
I will never talk to you again, ever
Because you left me alone
Dont bother to ask me for help
You help yourself because I wont help you
After what you did to me
I will never forgive you
So dont ask me why
I am stronger now
Now I know I dont need you or anybody else
If you dont believe what Im going to do
Then forget you
I dont need you help
And if I were you Id keep it
Just for a memory of me and what you did to me
Dont worry because Ill remember you and what you did to me
Just pack up all your memories and leave me alone
Because I dont need you
And the next time we meet well be enemies
Dont try to get me back
Because I wont came back no matter what you say or do
I m not an item you can throw away
And make sure you hate me after this poem
Because I hate you
I hope you have a good life without me
Because Ill have a good life without you
And you know what?
Youll thank me later for leaving you
Copyright ©
the_fallen
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2004-10-02 23:09:10]
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Re: I don't need you and I never will
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:49:42 PM AEST
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| powerful write. its always nice to stand up for ones self. |
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Re: I don't need you and I never will
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 03:27:25 PM AEST
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u know what, i'm speechless, this peice of writting
has more maturity, and rightfully placed anger in it,
then the bible itself, i was captivated by it, i read
every word, every line, and heard and felt your pain
this writting gives new meaning 2 the phrase . . .
" HELL HATH NO FURY, LIKE A WOMENS,
SCORN " . . . Dorian : )
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Re: I don't need you and I never will
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 07:10:03 PM AEST
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Wow, so much feelings in this poem, i'am speechless, its soooo very very deep and good, first your sad then your angery, wow i love this poem,
"Just pack up all your memories and leave me alone
Because I don’t need you"
I really liked that part its soo very true, keep up the good work b/c your a very good writer !!... GREAT WRITE !!!! |
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