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Rainbow
Contributed by
Seikjo
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:10:16 PM in AEST
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Oh, magick rainbow grant my wish.
I wish this was a land of peace.
A land were the Earth will not get hurt by our machines.
A beautiful place were life lives in harmony.
Rainbow, magick rainbow please grant me this one wish.
I have traveled distant miles just to find you.
At the base of the most beautiful waterfall.
Please, I beg of you.
At last my wish will be fulfilled.
But all my family and friends are fading away.
Why is that?
Why are we humans disapering?
I see, with us here we will eventually destory the Earth.
Thank you rainbow.
At least the animals will be safe.
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Seikjo
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Re: Rainbow
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:46:28 PM AEST
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| what makes you think animals are safe? even though humans do kill off a lot of them, whats started cant be stopped. global warming, the ability not to adapt to survive, and just the fact of life will still kill all of the animals. |
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Re: Rainbow
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:30:35 AM AEST
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It;s a wonderful dream.
which you know would not happen.
But your poem is very well written. good job. |
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