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the real me
Contributed by
runaway0516
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:40:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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No one knows how I fell inside
or the rules for myself I have to abide
Never cry in front of any one
when it comes to feelings i have none
on the inside im breaking down
any taste touch smell or sound
could trigger the flow of tears
but that would be my worst of my fears
I hide behind my jokative play
just so i dont have to say
anything to anyone about me
just to make it seem like im full of joy and glee
they treat me like im not there
but when i cry they start to stare
people ask me questions, ask me why
and that in itself makes me want to cry and cry and cry
they have no idea what im thinking inside
sometimes i just wanna commit suicide
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Re: the real me
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by lonelywolf04 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:55:16 AM AEST
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| wanting to and doin is differnt i know i have tried and some how i have blocked out what in thankin half the time so that i can tell in thankin but i dont know what about its kind of fun at times not know what is goin on in ur head there is only 1 thing i have found that makes suicide feeling go away and its corny but true and its the feeling of love i just wish i could find it again |
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Re: the real me
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 07:23:19 AM AEST
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i know just how you feel!!!!
i under stand your feeling and hurt and pain.
you've expressed it really beauitfully with excellent rhyme!
it's agood poem.
i'm sorry things are bad for you though. |
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Re: the real me
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by DirtyFool on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:04:23 PM AEST
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| Ive have felt like this! but i hope you get over this great write |
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