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This Life
Contributed by
von
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Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 12:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I thought I was doing the right thing all these years.
But day after day my eyes feel with tears.
This life that I hold in my hands
Is waht I've longed for to be mine.
Where did I go wrong when I thought everything was going just fine?
To hear the words "I hate you"
Brings a great pain to my heart.
And my world begins to fall apart.
I've tryed to be the best that I can be
But theres just not enough of me.
I'de lay my life on the line if I had to
I'de do what ever it would take so he could see that he wasn't a misstake.
This life I've created has showed me that
I too can be strong.
But many times it has told me that I was wrong.
I live my days wondering if it's the right time to get out of bed.
Should I let the sun shine in
Or put the covers over my head?
Never thought I'de have to play both rolls.
And it get's harder as each day unfolds.
My life I wouldn't trade for another.
I only wish this twisted world
Could teach me to be a better mother
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2002-11-13 00:30:00]
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Re: This Life
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 02:53:46 AM AEST
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| I'm sure you feel now that everything you do is wrong,but I'm sure later in life you'll know that you did what you had to & everything went ok! What I'm getting out of this poem is that you are a single parent trying to raise your kids & it doesnt feel like your doing the best job,well I know raising children isnt easy & it takes alot for any mother,my husbands on the road a lot & I too have to some times play both roles! I hope you'll feel better about this some day.God bless! Christina |
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Re: This Life
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 04:37:05 AM AEST
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Must say i have to agree with
Christina on this one, I enjoyed
reading this, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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