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Last Choice
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:33:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I've hoped that this darkness would go away,
That I would be human again one day,
But still it lurks, just under my skin,
Holds onto my mind like the darkest sin,
It flows through my veins, it covers me,
And never does it seem that I will be free,
It's part of me, it's become who I am,
But I won't except it, and I look at my hand,
And my bleeding wrist, and the pool on the floor,
And I ponder, need i have locked the door,
Not that it matters, no one cares why,
And I'll keep opening the wound until I bleed dry,
It's the only way, the only choice I have left,
So embrace me fate, come swift my death.
Copyright ©
MysticFireFairy
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2004-10-03 12:33:03]
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Re: Last Choice
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by pixie on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:36:00 PM AEST
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wow I felt every single word of this, a powerfully dark write, you have the gift to make your readers feel your pain and emotions,
pixie xx |
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Re: Last Choice
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by Remy on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:43:58 PM AEST
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uggunyerg... so dark, sad in a way that the hopeless feeling is drenched in this. but i remember thinking like this myself, good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Last Choice
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by SuicideParty on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:11:04 PM AEST
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Loved it. All of it. Very powerful. Great write.
~Sam |
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Re: Last Choice
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by lovesucks on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:10:52 PM AEST
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very emotional I have felt this way before I felt it for a long time and can still remember it like yesterday. Thank you very very nice, great expression
theresa |
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Re: Last Choice
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:21:37 PM AEST
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| great write. good concept to write about. |
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