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A Love Beginings End?
Contributed by
Alina
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:09:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hello Darkness
Smile My Friend
I'm here to write
And talk again
Of a love soon found
And a love soon lost
Heart's drenched in pain
But at what cost?
Of kisses unreal
And truth untold
Puzzle pieces found
Which now make my heart whole
Of blood stained glass
And tear drenched cheeks
Of two being's souls...........
Which join to meet.
A sickness of love
Is love disease
Or do I trust you
With the greatest of ease.
Why is this heart content.........?
Yet full of so much pain.
Will he love me......
Or will I be hurt again?
Candy kisses of truth untold
Two hearts unsure
That drip blood to be bold......
Only time will tell
Of these promises meant
Of life, the meaning
And love kept?
Hello My Darkness
Smile Again My Friend
Is this the begining
Of two chest pains to end?
" Will You Hurt Me
or Will I Hurt You,
Only Time Will Tell
Of The Unspoken Truth."
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-10-03 14:09:50]
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Re: A Love Beginings End?
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:50:06 PM AEST
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How sad alina, a tragedy set 2 words, beautifully
written, and dearly felt, sorry 4 your pain . . . Dorian
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Re: A Love Beginings End?
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by NoahsARK on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 03:14:39 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem, it makes me think of how most relationships are. Good Job!
Anita |
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Re: A Love Beginings End?
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by thewordzwithin on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:30:07 PM AEST
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| Incredible poem! I always enjoy reading the emotion behind a writer's thought and you expressed your feelings greatly. One thing though, I kind-of like the last line to be the title: "Unspoken Truth". It doesn't change the overall effect of the poem but it explains the definition of the type of love you are talking about. Unspoken. Well, it's just a thought. Anyway, I like it the way it is and keep up the good work and maintain your voice. |
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