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Suicide Rainbow
Contributed by
Hearts
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:22:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Have you ever known
whats on the other side of a rainbow?
the pot of gold is filled with death
It takes a lifetime to find
and noone will gaze upon its treasure.
Unless you give your soul away
greed will force out the love inside
and then your heart will be empty
as everything dear to you
will be no more.
Time will swallow your last breath
before you can even say goodbye!
Copyright ©
Hearts
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2004-10-03 14:22:26]
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Re: Suicide Rainbow
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by ravenblack_phoenix on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:44:58 PM AEST
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I like it, it's like an unexpected slap in the face.
WHAM, and before you know it, it's gone... |
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Re: Suicide Rainbow
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by SuicideParty on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:49:28 PM AEST
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Interesting concept. Places quite the spin on the whole, 'You'll never see the end of that rainbow.' saying.
It was great, I liked it a lot. Very well written, and the content was something that I'm sure most of us can relate to.
Thanks for sharing.
~Sam |
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Re: Suicide Rainbow
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by brokenbylove130 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 04:18:07 PM AEST
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this is a great peice. it shows the shallowness of the human race...the greed. i like it a lot.
^_^ mandi |
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Re: Suicide Rainbow
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 09:32:32 PM AEST
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| indeed, quite a twist and different perspective. great write. |
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