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I can't bare to move on without the love of u
Contributed by
Luckycharm
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 06:00:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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At first it was our love,
That kept us together,
But when we begin to get,
To know each other,
The simple things tore us apart,
You were my first love and my only love,
The only person who made me feel,
Like I was special inside,
The only person who could keep,
A girl like me safe and protected,
From any harm,
You made me complete,
Within my heart,
And when you use to hold me in your arms,
The darkness of my soul wen't away,
I loved you so much that nothing,
Or no one could stop me from being with you,
Sometimes I did fear that we would not,
Carry on that bond between us,
So now it's no more,
Can you image how many times I cry,
Because what we had was love,
Nothing was fake with us,
I can't bare to move on without the love of u
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Luckycharm
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2004-10-03 18:00:37]
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Re: I can't bare to move on without the love of u
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by Yousef on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 06:24:44 PM AEST
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Good poem, I really liked the last line which is the name of the poem "I can't bare to move on without the love of u", good job.
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Re: I can't bare to move on without the love of u
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by monophobic on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 07:22:19 PM AEST
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Re: I can't bare to move on without the love of u
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:52:29 PM AEST
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| even though you cant bare it. moving on is essenital to your future. excellent write well written and very emotional. |
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