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Words Get In My Way
Contributed by
CrimsonOrgazm
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:11:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Forcing a smile
Looks real, don't you think?
Forcing a laugh
Inside on the brink
The tears are free falling
My insides are crawling
So let me hold you
And tell you I'm ok
I won't let you
Think any other way
I can't tell you
There's pain inside my heart
So let me hold you
And keep you in the dark
Forcing optimism
Inside feeling bleak
Forcing carelessness
Inside feeling weak
Forcing love
Inside screaming at the word
Forcing my eyes to see outside the blur
So let me hold you
And tell you I'm ok
I won't let you
Think any other way
I can't tell you
There's pain inside my heart
So let me hold you
And keep you in the dark
Burnt too many times
For showing how I feel
Being numb to everything is my only way to deal
Being apathetic is my only way of cover
Wishing that I could tell another
But my words get in my way
So let me hold you
And tell you I'm ok
I won't let you
Think any other way
I can't tell you
There's pain inside my heart
So let me hold you
And keep you in the dark
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2004-10-03 22:11:09]
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Re: Words Get In My Way
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:34:18 PM AEST
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"So let me hold you
And tell you I'm ok
I won't let you
Think any other way
I can't tell you
There's pain inside my heart
So let me hold you
And keep you in the dark"
Darkly beautiful. |
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Re: Words Get In My Way
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:26:39 PM AEST
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| i loved it, very good and right to the point!!! Good job!!! |
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Re: Words Get In My Way
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by tifrob on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:52:48 AM AEST
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I loved it. This is tragic and wonderfully sweet all at the same time. GREAT ARTISTIC EXPRESSION...
J~ |
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Re: Words Get In My Way
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 03:21:22 AM AEST
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| I loved it, this iz so awesome!!! |
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Re: Words Get In My Way
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by Yousef on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:12:44 AM AEST
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| I thought of this poem as a song more than it's a poem, may be because of the repeating chorus, any way it's beautiful and well written, Good effort and Good Luck. |
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