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why
Contributed by
runaway0516
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:52:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My heart begins to pound
Sweat dripping from my face,
My head spinning round and round
As if I just finished a race.
Hes looking right at me
What should I do?
Can he see
That I like him too?
My heart aches
My stomach filled with joy,
For God sakes
Im like a child with a new toy.
Now hes walking toward me,
Looking into my eyes,
Could it be?
No, he broke my heart without saying why.
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2004-10-03 22:52:12]
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Re: why
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by DragonLuvSong on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:10:14 AM AEST
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| i like this a lot |
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Re: why
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by Yousef on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:25:40 AM AEST
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| Good effort, but I felt as if there is more, I mean more than what's written, good one. |
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Re: why
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by pixie on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:19:56 AM AEST
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awww a very sad and moving write,
pixie xx |
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