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am i too lost?
Contributed by
ll
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:12:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I tried to kill the pain
Suppressed by all my childish fears
But only brought more
And if u have to leave
I lay dying
I wish that u would just leave
And Im pouring crimson regret and betrayal
Cause ur presence still lingers here
Im dying praying bleeding screaming
And it wont leave me alone
Am I too lost to be saved
Am I too lost?
These wounds wont seem to heal
This pain is just to real
My god my tourniquet
Theres jus too much that time cannot erase
Return to my salvation
When u cried Id wipe away all of ur tears
When u screamed Id fight away all of ur fears
Do u remember me
I held ur hands through all of these years
Lost for so long
But u still have
Will u be on the other side
All of me
Or will u forget me
Im dying praying bleeding and screaming
U used to captivate me
Am I too lost to be saved
By ur resonating life
Am I too lost?
Now Im bound by the life u left behind
Ur face it haunts
My god my tourniquet
My once pleasant dreams
Return to me salvation
These wounds wont seem to heal
My wounds cry for the grave
This pain is just too real
My soul cries for deliverance
Theres just too much that time cannot erase
Will I be denied Christ
My suicide
Ive tried so hard to tell myself that ure gone
But though youre still with me
Ive been alone all alone
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2004-10-03 23:12:29]
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Re: am i too lost?
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:11:12 AM AEST
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| what the hell?! this isnt yours either! |
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Re: am i too lost?
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by AnastasiaN on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:25:32 AM AEST
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| this is just ridiculous...either include who's work it is or DON'T USE IT! it's called plagiarism.... |
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Re: am i too lost?
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by Yousef on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:41:54 AM AEST
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| I really don't know what to say, if you just had took one or two lines I wouldn't complain, but this is not poetry, these are not your words, and the right word here is "EVANCENSE". |
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Re: am i too lost?
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by the_fallen on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 08:11:46 PM AEST
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| linda, y r u using "my immortal" song lines 4 this poem? it kinda doesn't make sense |
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