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My Heart Bleeds For You
Contributed by
screwup
on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 07:06:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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cut to bleed tears of blood
not caring, feeling like crud
cocaine going up my nose
people betraying, friends or foes
**** up in my mind, I'm a whore
wanting to die, more and more
in dreams, desperation strips me
and then we fly away free
vindiction bleeds you
cutting and cutting, have we reached a break through
pain of another, heal this I plead
do not let her do this horrible deed
I feel helpless, stare in disbelief
insight of all my grief
I can see you dying
inspite of all the tears I am crying
seeing your beauty turned to waste
trying to leave this world in such a haste
you know I will follow
leaving my body so hollow
that to familiar feeling
our hearts are bleeding
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Re: My Heart Bleeds For You
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by Yousef on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:28:31 AM AEST
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| This is really a suicidal poem, I haven't read something like this before, it's a stirring poem indeed, but I wish I be able to read other poems for you that is less suicidal, I'm looking forward to your next ones, Good effort and Good luck. |
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Re: My Heart Bleeds For You
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by tractorbabe on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:32:01 PM AEST
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| awsome love the rythem of your poem it was very well ritten i loved it |
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Re: My Heart Bleeds For You
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:50:30 PM AEST
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wow this was very deep I love the feeling and
the emotion that you poured into this it
grabbed at my heart. I liked the last bit the
best, but it was all good.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: My Heart Bleeds For You
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by DamentedSuicide on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:25:23 AM AEST
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I felt the emotion from your poem
you are a truly gifted with words
~~~Raven~~~ |
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