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Breathe Life
Contributed by
screwup
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:04:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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has dying got the best of you my friend
is your life comming to an end
did you cut to deep
let the blood seep
or did you down a hole bottle of pills
all alone, looking out the window sill
you will really be missed
words cannot describe the pain I would feel
I'd feel like I could never heal
I keep thinking of you
please tell me it is not true
hope is not lost
especially not at life's cost
please... do not die
I would be lost at life's cry
please don't attempt suicide again
don't cut into that perfect skin
your scars are a mirror to mine
happiness we need to find
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Re: Breathe Life
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:13:25 AM AEST
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Such a painfilled poem, and written with such heartfelt feeling.
I hope your friend finds the strength in the friendship between you two, to find a way to heal the hurt, and not seek another way to end a life so precious.
Beautifully written showing true love through friendship.
I hope your friend see this as it may be that they can see the tears their struggle is inflicting upon you. |
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Re: Breathe Life
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by pixie on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:19:05 AM AEST
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this is a very sad and tragic write, I wish you both well on your journey to finding happiness *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Breathe Life
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:57:18 AM AEST
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i can see that it was very painful for you to write this!
stick by your friend. help her to see that she's NOT alone! i know that it's hard!
you have my eepest sympathy's and don't forget where i am if you ever need to talk. pm or e-mai me, i don't mind. |
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Re: Breathe Life
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by DirtyFool on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:14:46 PM AEST
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| This is a very painfull thing. nice write! i hope all end well |
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Re: Breathe Life
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by tractorbabe on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 07:51:29 PM AEST
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| greast poem..loved it well ritten |
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Re: Breathe Life
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by Hoots on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 12:39:51 PM AEST
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Soooooo deep man....so deep. It's crazy cuz a lot of these suicide poems mirror me and my best friends lives. But I enjoyed reading yours because it made me feel like I'm not alone...like there's somebody else out there who is feeling the same exact things that I am feeling...and that makes me feel better.
Krystle |
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