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Woman From Hell
Contributed by
Nicole_Rahaman
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:10:02 PM in AEST
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I have a story to tell
Of a woman who came from Hell
To experience life here on earth
She was sent straight from birth
Up she grew into a big family
Played hard as a small child, did she
Mother died, then father too
No, dont think Im telling of you.
As a teenager she ran away from home
And thought shed gone to a blissful Dome
Never knew that what she had found
Was another Furnace only above the ground.
A young woman she quickly became
Always fighting to stay in the game
Torment and thunder, to them she was a friend
Never justifying the means by the end.
She stopped one day and suddenly realized
That she was never gonna win that prize
Never to see the better side of life
Forever destined as a spouse to Strife.
That night she got into her bathroom
And decided to rid herself of the gloom
Took with her a car battery cell
Turned the water on and went straight back to Hell.
Nicole Rahaman
27.11.02
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Nicole_Rahaman
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2004-10-04 12:10:02]
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Re: Woman From Hell
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by pixie on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:13:55 PM AEST
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a very good write, I enjoyed this,
pixie xx |
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Re: Woman From Hell
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:41:36 PM AEST
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| Well done , i enjoyed the read. |
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Re: Woman From Hell
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by Dorian on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 02:55:28 PM AEST
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hummm, verry provacitive implications here, i
enjoyed reading it, at the same time trying 2 figure
who it was about, verry nicely put . . . Dorian |
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Re: Woman From Hell
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:32:50 PM AEST
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Lovely write....but I am also wondering where this came from..... esp the last verse....
Care to enlighten me??
Great to see you posting...
Jenni
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Re: Woman From Hell
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by gt on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 02:08:32 AM AEST
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very interesting poem, especially the ending. Very well written.
There's something nagging at me though. A sort of emptiness, i cant really describe. I think its because you say how awful her life is, without actually describing it. |
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Re: Woman From Hell
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 07:14:40 AM AEST
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| haha that's a great poem, love the dark humor. ^_^ It's a great story with nice rhyme and flow, awesome! |
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Re: Woman From Hell
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 11:40:03 AM AEST
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what a very good poem!
my eyes were glued to every word!
excellent stuff... |
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