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My Best Mistake
Contributed by
dirtyfool
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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My heart is bleeding
The tears are falling
There is nothing left to say
Nothing else to do
I have to live my life without you
You told me goodbye
And it toke all I had not to cry
When I turned my face away from yours
I didn't know what to do
Me without you?
I no longer know where to turn
Afarid to give love
And get heartbreak in return
I thought I had it all
But you just let it fall
Apart
You didn't have the heart
To keep holding on
So is this what you call forever
You were better off to promise me never
I'll be better off when your gone
My heart is healing
And and my eyes are dry
There is no more reason left to cry
Cause everyone makes mistakes
And before real love there are fakes
So thanx for being
My best mistake
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Re: My Best Mistake
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by pixie on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:17:41 PM AEST
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awwww this is very sad, losing a lover can be such pain, I hope you find a true love one day *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: My Best Mistake
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by theMoth on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 02:41:43 PM AEST
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It's a good poem.
Very sincere and well-spoken.
--Mothy |
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Re: My Best Mistake
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by brew on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:55:24 PM AEST
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| Not fair, is it?~ We sometimes tho, have to let the most precious and loved one go...Hurts, and makes one feel the worse. Good write tho.It will take time, but you will heal. Keep writing, good way to let those feelings be expressed |
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