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Not Coming Back
Contributed by
Fluffhead
on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:12:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You walked into my life,
And acted liked you cared.
You wiped away my tears,
And called me dear.
You said that we're forever.
Just you and me together.
Then I found you with her.
I felt so bad.
You crushed all we had.
And what did you do,
You just laughed.
And what did I do,
I forgave you.
Whats wrong with me?
Nothing.
Just don't talk to me,
Don't look at me,
You have no right to touch me.
The others might look away,
But I'm not like that.
I'm going to walk away.
I'm big and strong.
I do what I want.
I'm not going to cry.
You lost me.
I'm not coming back.
Copyright ©
Fluffhead
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2004-10-04 22:12:58]
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Re: Not Coming Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:16:16 PM AEST
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| you may have been tired when you wrote this, but i think it was really good. i understand what youre going thru, im going thru it too. i hope things gets better for you. peace n love. God bless. jenny |
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Re: Not Coming Back
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by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:19:27 PM AEST
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i like it alot. its so good keep up your good writeing
(read mine BabyFacedAngel2010 is my SN ^_^)
Erin |
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